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Kateena
2008-04-19
ch 3,
abuseAw...poor Lucy!! I love Pete already. Update SOON.
A Little Bitter
2008-04-10
ch 4,
abuseAh, good, you won't give up on it.

Right, i will put you on author's alert so i will know what you will be doing in the story... okay, that sounded stalkerish. Try to ignore that bit!
A Little Bitter
2008-04-10
ch 1,
abuseGod, i have been scowering fictionpress for so long to find stories that weren't all abouth the 'i'm so in love with my older brother's yummy best friend even though we totally hate each other' stories and i finally came across your wonderful fic.

Hello originality!
Angel of Ink
2008-04-04
ch 4,
abuseWow. That has to be the fastest rewrite in history- three chapters and you're already dissatisfied? I sense a perfectionist...

Well, whatev. Just write fast, yeah? :)
NoieD
2008-03-27
ch 4,
abuseThanks for reassuring us. You made a great start, so I'm happy you're going to polish it up a little!
Chelsea Dagger
2008-03-27
ch 4,
abuseI'm glad you're editing it to make it even better, and I hope you get finished with it quickly because I'm hooked! I said this before and I'm just going to reiterate. I have experience with the job, and if you ever need any help, or maybe even any stories, those I have in volumes. So just shoot me a PM if you need anything. :)
EmotionalTrauma
2008-03-27
ch 4,
abuseDon't give up!
Kohlomere
2008-03-27
ch 4,
abuseHey,
Okey-Dokey! I'm waiting on the edge of my seat!

Peace,
E.
Kohlomere
2008-03-26
ch 3,
abuseHey!
This is wild; why haven't you updated it lately?
I want to know what happens!

Please don't leave me hanging,
E.
EmotionalTrauma
2008-03-26
ch 3,
abuseDo not strangle... do not strangle... This is rather lovely. I'd love to see more of it.


-Biohazard
Angel of Ink
2008-03-25
ch 3,
abuseI like it... when are you going to update?
Terras1fan
2008-03-23
ch 3,
abuseIn my haste, I can only leave you with it wasn't too soon to be caught cheating in the story and that I'll be reading.
mixim
2008-02-20
ch 3,
abuseHey! This is one of the most original stories I've read on Fictionpress. Your ideas are amazingg. Update soon!
Chelsea Dagger
2008-02-15
ch 3,
abuseHey! I'm really enjoying your story so far. It's well written and the characters are all very interesting, but I really enjoy it because of where Lucy works.

You see, I work at Sesame Place (not the same caliber at ALL) which is just a theme park based on Sesame Street. Before I worked in photography there, I was Elmo. So I TOTALLY feel Lucy's pain. In every way.

But anyway, keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more!
thumbelina rocks
2008-02-03
ch 3,
abuseI am officially in love with this story. I've always been a little freaked out by Mickey Mouse so this story is definitely going to crack me up!
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