Hey! This is one of the most original stories I've read on Fictionpress. Your ideas are amazingg. Update soon!

Hey! I'm really enjoying your story so far. It's well written and the characters are all very interesting, but I really enjoy it because of where Lucy works.

You see, I work at Sesame Place (not the same caliber at ALL) which is just a theme park based on Sesame Street. Before I worked in photography there, I was Elmo. So I TOTALLY feel Lucy's pain. In every way.

But anyway, keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more!

I am officially in love with this story. I've always been a little freaked out by Mickey Mouse so this story is definitely going to crack me up!

Hey! I love this story so far (which is made evident by the fact that I'm reading it at 2:15 in the morning). It satirizes an element of society that is so ripe with potential for that sort of humor. I absolutely adore satire, especially when it is aimed at the bizarre fantasies and ideals that American society has cooked up for itself. Right now, I'm trying to work out who the main squeeze is going to be: Prince Charming (aka Eric) or Pete-the-Creeper (love the name there, by the way). I'm not asking you to give anything away, of course. I'm just musing to myself :-) Anyway, great job so far, and update soon!

I LOVE this story. I love it especially because I'm one of those girls who has unrealistic expectation of love thanks to Disney. Luckily I've matured and am (hopefully) less stupid about animated movies. It's nice to hear a story that un-glamour-izes everything. Good job so far! I sense sexual tension between Lucy and Eric! UPDATE SON!

Great story!

I found myself laughing out loud in someplaces. This is a great idea and it's really well-written. I Love her sarcasm! I bet your going to have her with pete or eric, right? I'm not sure which one though at this point...

update!

My two favorite lines were "so excuse me, I think a little paranoia is allowed" and "even though I’ve pretty much decided he’s just a stalker, not a serial killer." I love her sarcasm. And the end was hilarious and obviously humiliating (for her). Her apparent dislike for Disneyland is a nice twist because it should make her job more humorous for the readers (though humorless for her). And the other main characters...well, I'm sure they'll grow on me, but I already don't like Rick, especially the way he has her begging for his approval. Though I suppose that's a natural flaw for some girls, so at least one of her flaws is already clear.

More!

heh... I like it alot so far, but did you know that you cant find you if you search under authorpen name?

Yay! A new chapter! It was very enjoyable! There were a few grammar errors, but nothing big. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

- Kay (Let Them Eat Cake)

Hey, this is a great story so far, makes me laugh :) hehe. I was wondering, what's Pete's job at the Park?

Ahaha the towel scene. ;) funny stuff. If Lucy has long red hair, she could play Ariel and Eric could be Prince Eric...haha that would be superr coincedental. Wow...i think i know too much about Disney. But anyways, the characters all seem really interesting, and Pete is gonna be a funny character...or at least it seems like it. :) Can't wait for the next one!

Ahh! I love this. XD I started reading and I was like, so cute! And then I was like. YOU wrote this! Ms. Awesome Username!

Update soon or I'll karate chop you into next week.

-Sally :D

CUTE! I've never been to Disneyland; I'm a Disney WORLD girl! ANYWHO! I really liked this prologue. I seems VERY promising! And the main character seems like she's going to be very well developed! SO, I'm very excited about this and I can't wait until you update!

Great Job!

Kay (Let Them Eat Cake)

(Oh and good for you, being one of the few on here who don't care how many reviews they get! THERE NEEDS TO BE MORE OF US OUT THERE!)

Interesting. A friend's sister worked at Disneyworld as Snow White for a while, so it's gonna be interesting to compare perspectives. Haha But yea...cute story; well written, with an interesting plot. Can't wait to see how it turns out. :D