 kelloggs256 2007-12-04 . chapter 1You've stumped me with this one, the theme eludes me, but it was a good poem nonetheless, I'm sure I would appreciate it better if I knew even faintly what it was that was on your mind when you were writing this. |
 Imaginary Strangers 2007-11-20 . chapter 1I liked the language you used, and how it was harsh despite the shortness. It wasn't blunt, which made it even more interesting. The only thing is that I, personally, find the italics, bolds, and underlines distracting. If you word a poem right, which you did by the way, the emphasis is show anyway. But, it was good. Great job. |