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| heartfeltlove 2008-01-08 ch 2, | abuseshe is ** off! but I like your writing...The first chapter was almost like a journal... |
| Raishi 2007-12-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey Camille. I just wanted ot tell you that John really is a ** moron. I'm glad you're doing your best to let go of him. I also know from experience that you're a tough person to get to. When he finally gives up Lauren for good, then that will be when you two can fix your friendship. That guy doesn't know what he wants until it's gone. I hope you can still help him realize that someday. |
| Adeline Meyer 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abusei LOVE it! I think it's really cool how you just put all this out there, not caring if people read your inner mind or not. I can totally relate, too. I think a lot of girls can. It's also really cool how you wrote like you're planning out an entire conversation, adding more bits and pieces to it each time. Keep it up!! |
| Evil Angel of DOOM 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abuseThis was neat! Kinda confusing, but has a lot of emotion backed onto it. |