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| zcst4eva 2007-11-23 ch 1,  | abuseI'm not a huge fan of poetry, I like stories better but this poem really got to me. It hit on how I've felt in the past. Luckily I don't feel like this now. |
| multiples of six 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuseI could have written this so many times over the past two years until.. umm.. about a month ago.. hehe. =) So, I can sympathize with it a lot. I do agree with you about the first half being better, although the second half isn't bad. I really like "maybe in love with the idea of love/of someone to wrap myself in/to wrap in myself".. but the whole thing is really good. =) |
| Imaginary Strangers 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abuseI really loved this, because I think it's such a universal feeling. Especially that first/last line. I totally can relate, and I also like the lack of punctuation. Great job. |
| Artemis Anderson 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is really well done. Kudos. Keep up the great work! And I agree about the puncuation thing; it does more often than not ruin the effect. |
| DaRk TiNk 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abuseI really like this poem. It explains me in some many ways, but yet again isn't that the way all of us are?? Scared of rejection and scared they will say no? And that our apperance isn't good enough...but good job. I give you many kudos. =] |