 Lefae Alahambra 2008-11-14 . chapter 1It's not crap! It's cute! :)
I'm adding this to my favourites. It's simple, it paints a picture, and I can't resist that image of an owl turning its head curiously, as if examining me. Great work! |
 ihateface 2008-04-29 . chapter 1How lovely! |
 Irene300 2008-04-21 . chapter 1I don't know how, and I don't know why, but this haiku perfectly sums up my life. |
 Amy 2008-04-19 . chapter 1 I loved the summary:)
I like owls ergo I like this poem, a lot actually. And your other ones. |
 Mileana 2008-03-05 . chapter 1Interesting poem, I'm loving your work. I agree with the others, a bit polishing and it would be wonderful.
Great job,
Mileana x |
 Xanthe Taylor 2008-03-03 . chapter 1I really like it, it's a real "hoot"
Ah ha, yes! |
 InViSiBlE wOmAn 2007-11-22 . chapter 1I have to agree with smokey bear, this is such a cute little poem a little tweaking would make it perfect. Very good, write on :D |
 Smoky Bear 2007-11-21 . chapter 1this is very cute, i love your subject choice. though, i think you could have done a little more with this, there are a few wasted words that you could have used more creatively. don't be discouraged as writing great haiku is very difficult. |