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| superinsane95 2008-05-03 ch 28, anon. | abusethis was very cool! I liked Gretl and James. |
| Spork-a-rific 2008-04-16 ch 20, | abuseVery interesting. I love the poem-like format and the voice of your character. The only I have to say is that if you're going to use commas, make sure to use other punctuations (periods etc). If you don't want to use periods/quotation marks, make sure not to use commas either. It looks a little disjointed if you use only some punctuation. |
| Rachel Evans 2007-11-21 ch 8, | abuseInteresting. I like how it's in poem-form. ^_^ |