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superinsane95
2008-05-03
ch 28, anon.
abusethis was very cool! I liked Gretl and James.
Spork-a-rific
2008-04-16
ch 20,
abuseVery interesting. I love the poem-like format and the voice of your character. The only I have to say is that if you're going to use commas, make sure to use other punctuations (periods etc). If you don't want to use periods/quotation marks, make sure not to use commas either.

It looks a little disjointed if you use only some punctuation.
Rachel Evans
2007-11-21
ch 8,
abuseInteresting. I like how it's in poem-form. ^_^
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