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| A-Single-Kiss 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abuseI really really like that. its different. and i like that its different |
| Sahara Hayden 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abuseYes, I agree. You did a great job with this poem. So many thoughts and feelings ran through me; excellent job. I particularly liked the last line: "we'll fall into oblivion." That's extremely captivating. |