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| Crazy Insanity 2008-07-22 ch 1,  | abuseAW! That was so... cute! I loved it! |
| righthere431 2008-07-07 ch 1, | abusei like spearmint better =] |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-05-31 ch 1, | abuseHAHA i like this a lot! Love the quirky peppermint ending |
| Pione 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! :) |
| elisefey 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseWhee! That was so adorable and fun. Quick paced and still satisfying. I loved the ongoing spearmint-peppermint question and the description of the kiss. |
| LiMay 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuse=) really sweet and romantic |
| bubblie130 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was SO cute. I wonder why everytime she kisses him he taste like a food. ^_^ |
| found.eventually 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseHot. Hot. Hot. Hot. Hot. You sure know how to create some *cough* kissing *cough* chemistry among the two main characters, don't you? I love the way you portrayed the emotions and the way you wrote it. Oh, that, and the voice you gave to the mc. :) Brilliant, really! |
| Camelia Sinensis 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant! |
| Cooties 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was adorable! I loved the reoccurring idea of the spearmint gum! So cute! |
| krazynclutz 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseoh, its so sweet! i love it! and yummy :p |
| GANGSTAR 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseThis was really cute and good! It did it's job; it made my heart all warm and fuzzy. Cute! |
| mia5081 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseOh, that was cute :D Good Job! ~Mia |
| milenaa 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseThis was such a nice reading! Exactly the kind of one shot that makes me warm and fuzzy inside, as if I just had an ice cream sundae. I like how the characters were introduced and the quick pace of their act was slowed down to their confessions. Nice work. Fluffy, but loveable! |
| RoseLife 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseSO CuTE AND fLUFfY! haha well done xD |