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| I Murder on Impulse 2008-11-17 ch 1,   | Fantastic story! |
| StarsWatchAsIDance 2008-11-11 ch 1, | That was so cute! I absolutely loved it...sure it was cliche, but it was so adorable and really well written. Awesome job! |
| mo 2008-11-07 ch 1, | really great one shot |
| toffeecakesxox. 2008-10-03 ch 1, | Aw, so cute! :D I love the idea! What IS the difference? :P |
| kasey37 2008-09-16 ch 1, | you have an amazing writing style! but the story was EXTREMELY cliche. i would have loved it anyways if you didnt move the plot along so fast. there was hardly anything leading to her realizing that he was using her, and then him falling in love with her anyways. the characters needed more time to adjust to the situation and to each other. |
| AEJ325 2008-09-01 ch 1, | Ahh-haha! That was great! I totally want some peppermint gum now! lol I'm totally adding this to meh's fav stories! |
| Chance on Romance 2008-09-01 ch 1, | never knew gum would be so popular with kissing and wooing! |
| wistfulpearl 2008-08-02 ch 1, | aww this was really sweet :) good job |
| The Innocent Demon 2008-07-22 ch 1, | AW! That was so... cute! I loved it! |
| righthere431 2008-07-07 ch 1, | i like spearmint better =] |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-05-31 ch 1, | HAHA i like this a lot! Love the quirky peppermint ending |
| Pione 2008-05-10 ch 1, | Very nice! :) |
| elisefey 2008-04-24 ch 1, | Whee! That was so adorable and fun. Quick paced and still satisfying. I loved the ongoing spearmint-peppermint question and the description of the kiss. |
| LiMay 2008-03-26 ch 1, | =) really sweet and romantic |
| bubblie130 2008-03-22 ch 1, | That was SO cute. I wonder why everytime she kisses him he taste like a food. ^_^ |