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Yellow Duvet
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abuseAnd yet again you have amazed me. :D
Kicking Poe
2007-12-22
ch 1,
abusefragmented, as you said, but the discontinuity works wonderfully - true to life and love, with moments flickering across our eyelids (if that makes sense). I like the dental floss image. cheers.
painted.music
2007-11-23
ch 1,
abusekonnichi wa

"But she's just in love with love" is an excellent line. Profound. :) A great way to tie up the poem.

Favorite stanza: "Because she goes through boys like dental floss / (And she cleans her teeth / Religiously)"

It was absolutely, stunningly amazing! Awesome imagery. So so cool. I really liked this poem (especially that part).

Zaijen
-Shan-
kelsi bones
2007-11-22
ch 1,
abuseI really like this piece. It seems like a story in verse rather than just a poem. The last section is my very favorite:

Oh he is so in love/With her but she's/Just in love with love

Sometimes I think that that's how I am: just in love with love. That thought scares me a bit.

k.X

*adds to favorite stories
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