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| SilverTwilight 2007-11-22 ch 1,   | The structure is incredible for this sad, sad topic. I've suffered a bit of depression myself, and this is really expressive of the feelings. Wonderful, just wonderful. |
| redhairedone 2007-11-22 ch 1, | Wow. This is brilliant. I love the way you chose to present this poem. It most definitely corrolates with the image and feeling of pain. Really great job - this poem makes me understand and feel. Its definitely a 10. |