oh my god baby, that's awsome. you have to write more on this story. its awsome. the topic and the writing.

The story I can't say much about because it's just whipping.lol
But In S&M the Machanoist has no right to say "more" it's the dom's decision.Have you done reasearch on the subject?
But other than that I am intrested to see how the story progresses.

That was so twisted. I don't even like to think that there are people who do that to each other out there. It's well written, and an extremely unusual subject matter. For that reason, I think it could get very interesting.

Ok, that was creepy.