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| Oyuki 2008-06-08 ch 15,  | abusehe's just a butt! omg! this is really good. please have more soon. how are they going to work things out when they're so stubborn and the only one who can see them for fakes is cee. i hate her. anyway, more soon please! |
| geegus 2008-05-26 ch 15, | abusereally really good!! |
| lil bookworm 2008-05-22 ch 15, anon. | abusei love this story. I read all 15 chapters in like two hours. Just couldn't pull myself away =) It's really funny and cute too. Cant wait for you to update. Please hurry! |
| Pop the Bubble 2008-05-22 ch 15, | abuseheheh, nice :) I can't wait for the next update! :D:D |
| lynne102 2008-05-21 ch 15, | abuseThis is so awesome!! I LOVE this story!! Please continue soon!! :) |
| k-ky 2008-05-21 ch 15, | abusevery interesting couple.. anyway, nice story. keep up the good work. ^^ |
| TwoClovedHooves 2008-05-20 ch 15, | abuseHmm...I'll be really interested to see what it what the hell Tyler thought he was doing with that thing he last said. He had to have known that it totally killed the mood. Also, I have a sneaking suspicion that Cee is secretly a very nice girl. |
| LeenaElle 2008-05-19 ch 15, | abuseOh my goodness! His family is insane! But I absolutely love them! This was really a great chapter, I felt like I was in the middle of the argument somehow. The only criticism I have about the chapter...is the very end. I was just so confused, because when Tyler kept asking if she was ready to let him sleep in the bed, and she said no, he'd say good. Like he wanted to keep kissing her? So, it kind of sent a very weird signal when he started talking about Erin at the end of the chapter? I was really confused by it, it didn't seem to fit. Also, you go back and forth in the beginning about his famiy knowing he's married, and not knowing, check some of those sentences, because some say, I can't believe you're married, and then Andrea makes a point of saying they don't know they're married yet. Just something to double check and edit when you go back over it. So looking forward to the next chapter! |
| Sweet-Kiwi 2008-05-19 ch 15, | abuseHaha..Andrea and Tyler are hilarious. I read the entire story in one breath and I must say it made my day. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| superficialSagacity 2008-05-19 ch 15, | abuseWow...it's amazing Tyler turned out well even if his parents argue so much :D |
| foolxinxlove 2008-05-19 ch 15, | abuseI love your story. I especially love that it's been 15 chapters and they still bicker and semi-hate each other. Instead of hating each other and then falling in love in like three chapters. I can't wait to read more! |
| precious-memories 2008-05-19 ch 15, | abuseah love the ending! please please update soon! =] |
| Kbelle1 2008-05-19 ch 15, | abusegood chapter. update again soon!! |
| ChikinFairy 2008-05-17 ch 14, | abuseNice one! But I really, really, hate it when authors throw in cliffhangers but I guess that keeps the people reading. XD I really wonder what Tyler's family is like. PLEasE huRrY with the next chapter! |
| rainbabie 2008-05-02 ch 14, | abuse*squeals* OMG!! Is his family crazier then Andrea's?? LOL, I can't wait to see what they're like :) Thanks for another entertaining chapter. |