Ugh cliffhanger..

next, next, next. Write quickly... :)

What a great story! =) You should try to publish it one day, I'm sure it would be a success.

Can't wait for the next chapter !

very detailed chapter good job

Wonderful story! You really did an amazing job and I can`t wait to read more.

^_^ FINALLY AN UPDATE! YAY!

As a side note, I wasn't really all that surprised to find out that Raven was related to Ra'Skevvor. It just fit too well. Nice chapter, even if it was a little short compared to your previous ones. Glad to see that this story isn't dead.

So, I found this the other afternoon and finished what you have so far today and my gawsh! Gimme more! xD I really like this so far, and I adore stories where the main character isn't some perfect person who's never hurt. It's hard to find stories that don't overdo the whole angst/hurt thing too. What you have is the perfect mix, and I appreciate that it's well written too. So thank you a million times over for that.

One thing though: Where's Ravia?! D: I liked the bird, and she hasn't come up in awhile. Maybe she'll show up again? ^-^ And in my usual manner of mildly threatening the author of a good story: You'd better hurry up and give me more to read or I'll pester you. (Just tell me to stuff it if I get too annoying or whatever though.)

~WF

good chapter what was wrong with your comp?

Yo!

Why a cliffhanger?! But... thank you for writing so quickly. God bless you. You have me addicted... well, kind of. ;)

Smile,
ME

wow it's been a while since i read this. I was really surprised about Ra'Skevvor's attitude towards Raven. You'd think he didn't know the meaning of pride.
I've missed reading this story coz i think it's great. Thanks for the update!

Yay! I've been waiting for an update! The relationship between Raven and his father is quite interesting. It's fun to read. And I love how he got all concern in the end. I'll be waiting for the next!

God bless you!

Your story is marvellous. I'm addicted already. Thanks for sharing the story - this website lacks this type. It' too good...

Have a nice day and write quickly. Suspense kills! ;D

Smile,
ME

This is some good stuff! Keep it up. I'm really enjoying this.

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That up there is my email address!

Just wanted to say I finished your story! and You totally defeated the sound barriers with this one! I can't wait to continue reading it! Hopefully I'll be seeing more of Gray, Raven, Jett, Suil, and Iern.

Got some strong "Bully" vibes coming from Iern. Suil seems to be innocent as a babe and cute as a kitty. Not to mention that Gray totally dumped the "lost puppy", Jett, in Ravens esteemed lap. and Now Raven is desperately trying to turn said "puppy" into a killing machine.

I've got to say, this was a good read. I find it a fascinating concept.

I like the fact that Jett feels fear- it makes him human and allows us to be able to empathize with his situation. I also like the fact that, being smaller and less physically imposing, he has the advantage of speed. It's a logical trade-off, but one that often gets overlooked or ignored.

In terms of what to watch out for, I simply cringe at the thought of what might be a Star Wars moment in the making. Our villian admitted that he had a child with black hair, so... well, I think you know what I hint at. Don't get me wrong, go ahead and use it, just don't overdo it. Just keep in mind, what would Jett do with such a startling revelation?

Good job and keep up the good work!

This story is amazing! Took me forever to read, but it's extrememly good. Your plotline and characters are strong, well done.

Cheers

Chem6A