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| fatbird33 2008-03-09 ch 1,  | abuseis there supposed to be a semi colon after the first stanza? i liked the last line:) hey check out the review marathon! |
| Wish Bone 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseHaha. I swear I've fallen in love with the phrase 'The crunch of leaves,' because no matter what circumstance it's placed in, I can always truly feel it. A really nice, cute haiku. It has my kudos. :D ~WB |
| tearing hands 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuseSimple and nice. Where I live, it's already winter. :) Happy Thanksgiving. |
| FMA4EVER 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abusevery pretty...i like it alot...nicely written! Happy Thanxgiving! i love you!! ^.^ in Christ, ~FMA4EVER~ |
| Princess-anna57 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuse:) Gorgeous haiku. I heart it! Write on. ~Anna~ ^_^ |