AW! SO SAD!

Who would kill themself just because they were dumped by someone they loved? Seriously. But none the less, good story.

I can just picture it in my head; imagining that bitch with HIV and passing it along to Jake. And then, after he's diagnosed with it, she dumps him.

wow dramatic... so is your other story! sad

anyway can't wait till ya next story

Ah, sad D: But I liked that it wasnt really angsty, more like angry. Keep it up!

This was so sad and angst-ish. I loved it, though!