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| SirScott 2007-11-30 ch 3,  | abusePoor guy. My advice to him would be to forget the Weather Girl. It's good to see you update this. ~SirScott |
| Leinnansidhe 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseLOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE THIS CONCEPT. Whew, craziness aside; this was beautifully written. I hadn't ever thought of something like this, so it's nice to see on ficpress, where there's a lot of the same thing. I love your way of reading it between the lines, and I even feel like I know him, even though I've never met him. Great job! |
| SirScott 2007-11-27 ch 2, | abuseThat was good. It's nice to see that you updated. ~SirScott |
| SirScott 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseYou spend a big heap of your life pleasing others, I guess its apart of life. He must come from a biug school to have 63 girls, there was only 56 students in my class. The only mistake I noticed was this: His right hand, I bet it's a bit soar from practice soar should be sore. Keep up the good work. ~SirScott |
| Tytherpol 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuse"I wonder what made him so timid to live." i adore how you describe him. i feel like i know him, so that's got to be some kind of attribute to your artist-ness-ish. :/ creativity. it is so blunt and poetic at once. but a little off at times and too personal for me. but the coolest thing is when i finished reading it, i was really glad i did. which is a neat feeling. anyway, nice job girl. yours, -ty. |