That was so... cool.
At the moment I'm literally holding my breath right now...
nice story all in all...

its a nice story. i like how it ended. Spellcheck, can i ask you a question? Well my question is, what relevance does it have to your life? I'm just asking, I'm curoius.

You don't know how much...this story has relevance to my life.
I loved it. Despite the fact that it scared me shitless.
...It was well written, I must add.

Great song, by the way.

-Spellcheck.

okay. when i came across this story, it was destiny.

i was humming mr brightside in my head, and what do you know. i came across this story.

and i really loved it. its so sad how he cant control his feelings, i think anyone can relate. lord knows i can.

great job. seriously.

I'm not very good at writing reviews, but I really enjoyed this. The writing, blunt, rough, fits Jack's personality perfectly and it has its own theme song! Good job, I hope you add more.