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| Alioth 2007-12-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was so... cool. At the moment I'm literally holding my breath right now... nice story all in all... |
| superrrrr! 2007-11-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseits a nice story. i like how it ended. Spellcheck, can i ask you a question? Well my question is, what relevance does it have to your life? I'm just asking, I'm curoius. |
| Denny Starbucks 2007-11-23 ch 1,  | abuseYou don't know how much...this story has relevance to my life. I loved it. Despite the fact that it scared me shitless. ...It was well written, I must add. Great song, by the way. -Spellcheck. |
| hulha 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuseokay. when i came across this story, it was destiny. i was humming mr brightside in my head, and what do you know. i came across this story. and i really loved it. its so sad how he cant control his feelings, i think anyone can relate. lord knows i can. great job. seriously. |
| SilverTwilight 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuseI'm not very good at writing reviews, but I really enjoyed this. The writing, blunt, rough, fits Jack's personality perfectly and it has its own theme song! Good job, I hope you add more. |