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| Euphorialie 2008-02-04 ch 1,   | Yay, someone else who's as obsessed with quotes as me! That Edgar Allen Poe quote? The dream one? One of my ALL TIME FAVORITE quotes ever. I didn't think anyone else found it as entertaining as me. Actually I'm basing an art project on it right now. So whoo for you for knowing it! And for another amazing first chapter! I'm reading all of your stuff finally (well, what I've reviewed so far is what I've read), and let me tell you, I'm becoming quite jealous. So wonderful start, and I would be quite flaverboulus, if you continued (yes, I did just make up that word)! Cause I love random characters. They make me giggle. And feel less weird. So yay! Update something, cause all your stuff is awesome! - Euphie |
| dangelicessence 2007-12-22 ch 1, | That was so cute. I'm sorry I don't have any real crit for you. It's gotten to the point that I say, "oh, something by Dellarose," and assume it's perfect. Sorry about that.I enjoyed it though^^. |
| Aleksy The Flying Onion 2007-11-25 ch 1, | Aw! CUTENESS, GARBLE GARBLE YUM! Me likee! Me likee mucho..uh, alot-o! This is cute, and oh so quirky. I really, really like the characters already. Quirky is honestly the best way I can describe it. Dellarose is the quintessential Quirk! AHA! You can quote me on that. ;D I'm excited to see where your twisted little brain will take this. Can't wait! |
| Rizzy 2007-11-24 ch 1, | I like it so far X3 |
| Jack Argyle 2007-11-23 ch 1, | 'I love cheese'- heh, don't we all? Ah, it's great to meet a young teenage character who writes on their arm instead of cutting it. Sivi sure has an odd set of traits to her name, though I didn't expect anything less from you. For the whole chapter, I must admit, I was imagining a small planet rotating around her head, but that's just my easily distracted imagination. Rowan seems to be nice and straight-forward, though you'll no doubt twist his character in some way. All in all I give this two thumbs up; which, when taking into account thumb-star ratios, equates to five stars. |
| XxUnLikelyAnGeLxX 2007-11-23 ch 1, | lol..it was cool!This is ur first romance story? wow. it turned out well!^-^ |
| pop-yur-fcukn-collar. 2007-11-22 ch 1, | Interesting beginning. I liked it a lot!! Rowan seems like a cool guy and i can tell that Sivi will be an interesting character. |
| Leinnansidhe 2007-11-22 ch 1, | THIS IS QUIRKY AND I LOVE IT AND THE CHARACTER IS INTERESTING AND WITTY AND SUAVE AND I'M TYPING 'AND' A LOT. :3 On a calmer note, I can't wait to read the next chapter. |
| Georgianna 2007-11-22 ch 1, | this is very entertaining and unusual. also very well written. did i say funny, too? well, it is. :) |