I love this, you know. I really really do. The last couple of paragraphs are so sad and beautiful... ;__;

It amuses me that you have several homages to my Drunken Kisses in here, because, hey--it's amusing. xD;;

But still, this is really good. Very pretty--very sad.

Uwah.

Very sad. I like the fact that the narrator is distanced-if not emotionally, then by aquaintanceship. It's cute too.