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| Peppermint Schmaltz 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseI don't know if this is the poem you told me about in your review, but it's a good one none the less...well done. |
| Core Satiated 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseWow, this caused so much emotion in me. I couldn't truly imagine that sort of pain until you painted it so vividly with this. You portrayed the heartbreak while maintaining the soldier's pride and integrity. I always hold soldiers with such high regard, so it really meant a lot to me. Awesome job. |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseAw, that's really sad but pretty. = ) I kinda like it...One thing, though. The first two lines rhyme and the rest didn't...I found that to be a little awkward. But other than that, lovely. = ) |