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Reviews For: I'll be Home for the Holidays

Peppermint Schmaltz
2007-12-01
ch 1,
abuseI don't know if this is the poem you told me about in your review, but it's a good one none the less...well done.
Core Satiated
2007-12-01
ch 1,
abuseWow, this caused so much emotion in me. I couldn't truly imagine that sort of pain until you painted it so vividly with this. You portrayed the heartbreak while maintaining the soldier's pride and integrity. I always hold soldiers with such high regard, so it really meant a lot to me. Awesome job.
smile for the sunshine
2007-11-23
ch 1,
abuseAw, that's really sad but pretty. = )

I kinda like it...One thing, though. The first two lines rhyme and the rest didn't...I found that to be a little awkward. But other than that, lovely. = )
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