FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY! Hope you update soon. The character's are fantastic and the plot is so frigging engaging. Awesome

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My mind is blank. I normally have at least SOMETHING to say.

Nothing. Wow... this has never happened.

I sound like a guy having sex with someone and my cock deflated.

Picture that in your head.

I love this story.

Poor mel and poor Tom.. i mean Tom is like gd.. he pretty much will know something went down.. wat if he changes his mind about Fox going with him once he finds out!

haha Fox is so mean to Tom.. wanting to punch him and make him jealous... and what happened in that car when Fx was asleep.

Haha Yay Fox! ew percy old creepy men freak me out... i think tom should knock him out or something and steal his car.

Poor everyone really.. they were so well. slightly as happy as they can be while o the run.. what a nice reprieve it was..

I like Mel so much! is he gonna come back ever?

This story is great, and your writing style is clean and strong, but I have to say that I'm a little confused via the progression of the story. I still don't know much more about Tom as I did three chapters ago, I mean in the sense of his character. I would like to know more about Tom.

Yay three updates all at once! That was unexpected to say the least, but it was good. I cant wait to see Tom's reaction to that...

:( Poor Mel! I understand why Fox acted like he did, but it still seems so cruel!

*giggle* this is such an amazing story. I like the Miles and Fox interaction.lol. Tom is jealous!

:) god, I've missed this story. Fox ix amazing and I atill love him. :) great job!

nyah! what happened to fugitive? i was just sitting in my chem class, thinking abt ure story! come back, please... :) (no rush though.)

Ah, man, this story is so a million shades of awesome. Update soon, please?

Well I think you pretty much got it perfect. Just the voice of the character makes the most random or dramatic things perfectly natural.