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| its.Nothing.Special 2007-11-24 ch 1,  | abuseAAHA this is so cute! Drew and Ian have got their hands full with Effie (nice name) and Eda...good luck to them. :P It was sort of weird but totally endearing how Effie and Ian were friends with their teacher...I would've expounded on that some more this chapter if I were you, but whatever. I'm glad Effie told Candace off either way. =D [Two mounds of fat and a fake smile. Yeah…winning attributes.] OMGG AAHAHAHA ROFL you have NO IDEA how much I was cracking up at that. HILARIOUS. Are you always going to switch POV like in this chapter? Anyways, awesome start. Looking forward to more! ;)becky |
| iced-faerie 2007-11-23 ch 2, | abuseGreat story...love the plot and the characters..definitely can't wait until the next chapter! |
| MacadamiaNut3482 2007-11-23 ch 2, | abuseomg! ian shrunk! rofl! i just like this more and more. plz update soon! |
| MacadamiaNut3482 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abusei really like this! drew sounds so cute and fuzzy. please update soon, i wanna read more! |