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| pheonixorion10 2008-05-15 ch 6,  | abuseplease update this soon its so good but it is kind of annoying they way she can never really say anything to bobby its frustrating but its your storys so eh update soon thanks |
| Ambergirl1029 2008-05-02 ch 6, | abuseme thinks bobby is an ** and me thinks that me has every reason to think so right?? anyways i dont know why i wrote in me style im a bit touched in the head lol jk anyways i love the little dog a chihuahua pearl she was funny sausage sausage sausage bye Amber |
| Ambergirl1029 2008-05-01 ch 4, | abuselol i love it so far |
| SparklingStar25 2008-05-01 ch 6, | abuseAhh!The nerve! I really dont like him...he's being such a jerk! Till now anyway... And I love Gloria..even Luci actually..but she's a bit too intimidated.Hopefully it'll change soon..I mean,she is gonna stand up against him right? |
| notebaggage 2008-04-30 ch 6, | abuseABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY. Lol! I can't believe I didn't read it earlier. I LOVE LUCI. And Gloria. AND EVERYONE. EVEN BOBBY. Muahahahaha. I especially love the arguments that Luci and Gloria have HAHAHA. So favouriting. C: |
| Da Vinci at Work 2008-04-28 ch 5, | abuseLMFAO BOBBY BITCHCAKES! lol. I love the dialog through all of this. It's ** brilliant! |
| Da Vinci at Work 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseLOL. This is CRAZY. XD Love the talking fish, GLORIA!! =] I need to get some talking fish soon. |
| sae 2008-04-28 ch 6, anon. | abuse~That's an awesome story you've come up with! I do hope that you're still going to continue it as I really would love to read a new chapter. Gloria rocks! (And I hope Luci will get a backbone. She should listen more to Gloria X3) |
| I.Heart.Shi 2008-04-27 ch 5, | abuse..not so sure i like this luci girl she's a bit of a loser. backbone? please tell me she gets one! |
| I.Heart.Shi 2008-04-27 ch 3, | abuseHAHAHAHA this is so PAINFULLY unserious! I LOVE IT! its like 2 in the morning and im pretty sure ive woe the neigbours son with my laughter! how did you come up with this fic!? very interested in the genius behind it xoxo |
| Kelsci 2008-04-24 ch 6, anon. | abuseHey, This is such an awesome idea. Actually, I've toyed with this idea before, but I've never been able to pull it off. And pull it off you certainly did. God, I was laughing so hard! I actually like that you shifted the POV for a while. I think even Ella needs a bit more fleshing out. And jeez, I love Gloria. Such an awesome, straightforward little guy. And...so much to say! But for now, I'm begging you to update. I see that you haven't updated since December, and that's scaring the heck out of me. I need more of this story! It's like a welcome addiction. It's so different from other stuff I've read on FP. Nice job. Please, feed my addiction? -Kelsci |
| Roman C Lee 2008-03-31 ch 6, | abuseThis is awsome; I really havent read anything like it before, most of the time stories are just knock off of each other, but this is original! ^_^ Please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Mal 2008-03-28 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis is so good! i couldn't even get past the first 2 paragraphs before i was laughing my face off! my sister walked in thinking i was choking. i seriously can't wait till you update this. the animals are amazing. i'll never look at a goldfish the same way again. Bobby should go play in traffic though... |
| admit it.you luv me 2008-03-25 ch 6, | abusehaha...this is cute |
| Miss Toadstool 2008-03-24 ch 6, | abuseWOW BOBBY. I enjoyed this. I dont like POV changing but you did it well. Update when you can! I'll be waiting :D |