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| Ambergirl1029 2008-05-02 ch 6,  | abuseme thinks bobby is an ** and me thinks that me has every reason to think so right?? anyways i dont know why i wrote in me style im a bit touched in the head lol jk anyways i love the little dog a chihuahua pearl she was funny sausage sausage sausage bye Amber |
| Ambergirl1029 2008-05-01 ch 4, | abuselol i love it so far |
| SparklingStar25 2008-05-01 ch 6, | abuseAhh!The nerve! I really dont like him...he's being such a jerk! Till now anyway... And I love Gloria..even Luci actually..but she's a bit too intimidated.Hopefully it'll change soon..I mean,she is gonna stand up against him right? |
| notebaggage 2008-04-30 ch 6, | abuseABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY. Lol! I can't believe I didn't read it earlier. I LOVE LUCI. And Gloria. AND EVERYONE. EVEN BOBBY. Muahahahaha. I especially love the arguments that Luci and Gloria have HAHAHA. So favouriting. C: |
| Da Vinci at Work 2008-04-28 ch 5, | abuseLMFAO BOBBY BITCHCAKES! lol. I love the dialog through all of this. It's ** brilliant! |
| Da Vinci at Work 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseLOL. This is CRAZY. XD Love the talking fish, GLORIA!! =] I need to get some talking fish soon. |
| sae 2008-04-28 ch 6, anon. | abuse~That's an awesome story you've come up with! I do hope that you're still going to continue it as I really would love to read a new chapter. Gloria rocks! (And I hope Luci will get a backbone. She should listen more to Gloria X3) |
| I.Heart.Shi 2008-04-27 ch 5, | abuse..not so sure i like this luci girl she's a bit of a loser. backbone? please tell me she gets one! |
| I.Heart.Shi 2008-04-27 ch 3, | abuseHAHAHAHA this is so PAINFULLY unserious! I LOVE IT! its like 2 in the morning and im pretty sure ive woe the neigbours son with my laughter! how did you come up with this fic!? very interested in the genius behind it xoxo |
| Kelsci 2008-04-24 ch 6, anon. | abuseHey, This is such an awesome idea. Actually, I've toyed with this idea before, but I've never been able to pull it off. And pull it off you certainly did. God, I was laughing so hard! I actually like that you shifted the POV for a while. I think even Ella needs a bit more fleshing out. And jeez, I love Gloria. Such an awesome, straightforward little guy. And...so much to say! But for now, I'm begging you to update. I see that you haven't updated since December, and that's scaring the heck out of me. I need more of this story! It's like a welcome addiction. It's so different from other stuff I've read on FP. Nice job. Please, feed my addiction? -Kelsci |
| Roman C Lee 2008-03-31 ch 6, | abuseThis is awsome; I really havent read anything like it before, most of the time stories are just knock off of each other, but this is original! ^_^ Please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Mal 2008-03-28 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis is so good! i couldn't even get past the first 2 paragraphs before i was laughing my face off! my sister walked in thinking i was choking. i seriously can't wait till you update this. the animals are amazing. i'll never look at a goldfish the same way again. Bobby should go play in traffic though... |
| admit it.you luv me 2008-03-25 ch 6, | abusehaha...this is cute |
| Miss Toadstool 2008-03-24 ch 6, | abuseWOW BOBBY. I enjoyed this. I dont like POV changing but you did it well. Update when you can! I'll be waiting :D |
| Miss Toadstool 2008-03-24 ch 5, | abuseYess! I love it too. good work. MAN bobby is a piece of work. |