Reviews for Upon a Star
Geraldine Aubergine 4/23/12 . chapter 1
Really great descriptions. I love the idea and the symbolism of wishing on a black hole. Loses its pacing a little in the middle but the imagery is so strong it doesn't really matter. :D

-Geri
Little girl Big world 8/16/09 . chapter 1
"Sinking through the twilight sky,

Lost within its very own soul." -I like how you characterize the star making it seem kind of lost and hopeless.

"I wish I die with no regrets," -A wonderful wish!

I like the rhyme scheme in this. Nicely done!
Kenna-Kat11 5/4/08 . chapter 1
wow

that was absolutely amazing

i loved it

and it was so powerful and beautiful

awesome job

one of the best poems i have ever read

E
simpleplan13 12/16/07 . chapter 1
I really love this.. the rhyming is great and the whole piece is very sweet... the ending is great and unexpected
CrazyTurtles 12/11/07 . chapter 1
Beautifly sad. I love the last few lines, especially the one about ashes falling upon the stars. Beautiful.
sourgummyworms2007 12/7/07 . chapter 1
spur of the moment is the best type of poem to me. thats how my poems are. neway. me like.
MoonlitMaiden 11/26/07 . chapter 1
There is something beautiful about this poem and yet underneath it seems so dark. I'm not sure, this is what I got from the poem.

I love your format, great rhyming, too.

Hope to read some of your other works,

Moonlit Maiden
shazzzzzzz 11/25/07 . chapter 1
that was beautiful

my ashes fall upon the stars

and

andnadndnadndnadndand

make my life halfheartedly great

UR AMAZING

honey

i love you

lol
Princess-anna57 11/24/07 . chapter 1
:) GREAT poem. So glad you posted! *clap clap clap*. Write on!

Anna _
IrrevocableLove 11/24/07 . chapter 1
I liked it. It's got a bit of a depressed undertone though. Is there a reason for that?
smile for the sunshine 11/24/07 . chapter 1
I thought this was beautiful...Your last stanza (the line about the ashes) actually reminded me of my poem (broken is beautiful)...But I truly loved this. It was very well written. Good work. Keep writing. )
Kenshinswife 11/23/07 . chapter 1
This was beautiful foo, one of my favorites so far. It rhymed perfectly and filled me with hope, but but sad in the end because it seemed like your wish wasn't fulfilled. I especially love the first part,

I wished upon a star tonight,

A black one with an empty hole,

Sinking through the twilight sky,

Lost within its very own soul.

I just love how you write.
fuzbrat 11/23/07 . chapter 1
I like this one, not really sure what reason but it's nice. i know this might sound a little lame but I'm still suffering from turkey coma lol. Keep up the good work
Tekla 11/23/07 . chapter 1
you always have such a way with words! I love it. )

Keep up the good work!

gigglebug
mate.feed.kill.repeat 11/23/07 . chapter 1
It's so tragically beautifully simply. Very admirable work. I think I fell in love with it. ] Favorites list, I believe.

-stix-