Really great descriptions. I love the idea and the symbolism of wishing on a black hole. Loses its pacing a little in the middle but the imagery is so strong it doesn't really matter. :D

-Geri

"Sinking through the twilight sky,

Lost within its very own soul." -I like how you characterize the star making it seem kind of lost and hopeless.

"I wish I die with no regrets," -A wonderful wish!

I like the rhyme scheme in this. Nicely done!

wow

that was absolutely amazing

i loved it

and it was so powerful and beautiful

awesome job

one of the best poems i have ever read

E

I really love this.. the rhyming is great and the whole piece is very sweet... the ending is great and unexpected

Beautifly sad. I love the last few lines, especially the one about ashes falling upon the stars. Beautiful.

spur of the moment is the best type of poem to me. thats how my poems are. neway. me like.

There is something beautiful about this poem and yet underneath it seems so dark. I'm not sure, this is what I got from the poem.

I love your format, great rhyming, too.

Hope to read some of your other works,

Moonlit Maiden

that was beautiful

my ashes fall upon the stars

and

andnadndnadndnadndand

make my life halfheartedly great

UR AMAZING

honey

i love you

lol

:) GREAT poem. So glad you posted! *clap clap clap*. Write on!

Anna _

I liked it. It's got a bit of a depressed undertone though. Is there a reason for that?

I thought this was beautiful...Your last stanza (the line about the ashes) actually reminded me of my poem (broken is beautiful)...But I truly loved this. It was very well written. Good work. Keep writing. )

This was beautiful foo, one of my favorites so far. It rhymed perfectly and filled me with hope, but but sad in the end because it seemed like your wish wasn't fulfilled. I especially love the first part,

I wished upon a star tonight,

A black one with an empty hole,

Sinking through the twilight sky,

Lost within its very own soul.

I just love how you write.

I like this one, not really sure what reason but it's nice. i know this might sound a little lame but I'm still suffering from turkey coma lol. Keep up the good work

you always have such a way with words! I love it. )

Keep up the good work!

gigglebug

It's so tragically beautifully simply. Very admirable work. I think I fell in love with it. ] Favorites list, I believe.

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