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| Kenna-Kat11 2008-05-04 ch 1,   | wow that was absolutely amazing i loved it and it was so powerful and beautiful awesome job one of the best poems i have ever read ~E~ |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-16 ch 1, | I really love this.. the rhyming is great and the whole piece is very sweet... the ending is great and unexpected |
| CrazyTurtles 2007-12-11 ch 1, | Beautifly sad. I love the last few lines, especially the one about ashes falling upon the stars. Beautiful. |
| sourgummyworms2007 2007-12-07 ch 1, | spur of the moment is the best type of poem to me. thats how my poems are. neway. me like. |
| MoonlitMaiden 2007-11-26 ch 1, | There is something beautiful about this poem and yet underneath it seems so dark. I'm not sure, this is what I got from the poem. I love your format, great rhyming, too. Hope to read some of your other works, ~Moonlit Maiden~ |
| shazzzzzzz 2007-11-25 ch 1, | that was beautiful my ashes fall upon the stars and andnadndnadndnadndand make my life halfheartedly great UR AMAZING honey i love you lol |
| Princess-anna57 2007-11-24 ch 1, | :) GREAT poem. So glad you posted! *clap clap clap*. Write on! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| IrrevocableLove 2007-11-24 ch 1, | I liked it. It's got a bit of a depressed undertone though. Is there a reason for that? |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-11-24 ch 1, | I thought this was beautiful...Your last stanza (the line about the ashes) actually reminded me of my poem (broken is beautiful)...But I truly loved this. It was very well written. Good work. Keep writing. = ) |
| Kenshinswife 2007-11-23 ch 1, | This was beautiful foo, one of my favorites so far. It rhymed perfectly and filled me with hope, but but sad in the end because it seemed like your wish wasn't fulfilled. I especially love the first part, I wished upon a star tonight, A black one with an empty hole, Sinking through the twilight sky, Lost within its very own soul. I just love how you write. |
| fuzbrat 2007-11-23 ch 1, | I like this one, not really sure what reason but it's nice. i know this might sound a little lame but I'm still suffering from turkey coma lol. Keep up the good work |
| gigglebug 2007-11-23 ch 1, | you always have such a way with words! I love it. =) Keep up the good work! ~gigglebug |
| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2007-11-23 ch 1, | It's so tragically beautifully simply. Very admirable work. I think I fell in love with it. =] Favorites list, I believe. -stix- |