Wow.

OME THAT IS AMAZING!!

please continue!

It was pretty good, but man, I really hate it when the women are called degrading names like "**" and "**". It's a serious turn-off.

you should keep in going. it's really good

Great story I love it! Wonderful master character, lol but i gotta tell yea i wanted to smack him back hehe. WOW i love ur story!

Hey, your story is really interesting. Is there going to be more?