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Solstice Of Light 2007-11-25 ch 1,	This is a good poem, but the punctuation, I think, is often misused. Semi-colons are used to either describe the first part of the sentence better or to make a list with. Sol
GreekB 2007-11-23 ch 1,	Well, done, it was a good poem and i could tell you put alot of feeling inot it, though I'd prefer to read about other subjects because, sometimes, war is a the lesser of 2 evils, I mean, what woould you suggest we do during WW2 with Hitler. He was evil. Still, I don't want you to think I'm laying into you, because i'm not, it was a good poem, and like I say, I can sense the emotion in it, I just disagree sometimes. (saying that, I'm not FOR war, I'm just not always against it. You gotta do what you gotts do) If you have any other poems I would gladly read them. (i intend to post a poem in a few days and would appreciate your oppion, so you get your chance to evaluate my work.)
SilverTwilight 2007-11-22 ch 1,	War, what is is good for? Absolutely nothing, and you portraited it so well. The comparaisons are haunting, therefore effective. I got chills from reading this. Good chills.