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| Sakina the Fallen Angel 2008-02-24 ch 2, | abuseOh mush mushy! There are a few typos, scanning the page I can't remember where they are...a read through will fix them! =p Sakina x |
| Sakina the Fallen Angel 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseAw! This is such a cute story! Sakina x |
| substitute angel 2008-01-11 ch 2, | abuseThis is very cute. Very sweet and romantic. I like how it's unfolding. Thanks for telling me about the update. Sometimes I get so busy I forget to come back and check, so a reminder once in a while is great. Good work. Cheers, Blue Calico |
| -shawdii you a ten- 2008-01-11 ch 2, | abusegreat story! i love it!! |
| substitute angel 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseI said I'd check out some of your work and so I thought I'd check out this one, because I too am an avid basketball fan. I really liked reading this. It was cute and cliche, but that made it even better. You said this was a two shot? So I guess there's one more entry waiting to be posted? Well, I hope so. I'll definitely read it if you give me the headsup when you post it. I only noticed a couple of grammar errors, but nothing to worry over. Great job! Have a Wonderful New Years! Cheers, Blue Calico |