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Sakina the Fallen Angel
2008-02-24
ch 2,
abuseOh mush mushy! There are a few typos, scanning the page I can't remember where they are...a read through will fix them! =p

Sakina x
Sakina the Fallen Angel
2008-02-24
ch 1,
abuseAw! This is such a cute story!

Sakina x
substitute angel
2008-01-11
ch 2,
abuseThis is very cute. Very sweet and romantic. I like how it's unfolding. Thanks for telling me about the update. Sometimes I get so busy I forget to come back and check, so a reminder once in a while is great. Good work.

Cheers,
Blue Calico
-shawdii you a ten-
2008-01-11
ch 2,
abusegreat story! i love it!!
substitute angel
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abuseI said I'd check out some of your work and so I thought I'd check out this one, because I too am an avid basketball fan. I really liked reading this. It was cute and cliche, but that made it even better. You said this was a two shot? So I guess there's one more entry waiting to be posted? Well, I hope so. I'll definitely read it if you give me the headsup when you post it. I only noticed a couple of grammar errors, but nothing to worry over. Great job! Have a Wonderful New Years!

Cheers,
Blue Calico
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