This is amazing. I love the descriptions and saying what happens at different places on the playground. The ending was great.

Beautiful. Just beautiful.
~Liza

I've spent many nights at playgrounds with close friends wasting life and trying to imagine a somewhat bright future, and speaking of unrequited love

I really, really dig this. Your word choice is great. The title is perfect.

just ** gorgeous . you honestly left me breathless .

love love love. yes.

This is really nice, i can actually picture something like this kinda like dream like though and more of nymph like girls than modern day every day people, great job

great poem. I love the diction and the imagery of the poem. I cannot wait for more. Keep it up.

this was interesting. a little scary and a little sad. you seemed to have a good grip on figurative language here, though. that's good. so yeah, this poem was nice. i liked it. = )