Reviews for tonight at the playground

Indigo Carmine 2008-03-26 ch 1,	abuseI really, really dig this. Your word choice is great. The title is perfect.
riotmaker 2008-01-13 ch 1,	abusejust ** gorgeous . you honestly left me breathless .
dollface and her cancer 2007-11-28 ch 1,	abuselove love love. yes.
Masked Soul 2007-11-26 ch 1,	abuseThis is really nice, i can actually picture something like this kinda like dream like though and more of nymph like girls than modern day every day people, great job
Faith Adeline 2007-11-23 ch 1,	abusegreat poem. I love the diction and the imagery of the poem. I cannot wait for more. Keep it up.
smile for the sunshine 2007-11-23 ch 1,	abusethis was interesting. a little scary and a little sad. you seemed to have a good grip on figurative language here, though. that's good. so yeah, this poem was nice. i liked it. = )