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| Auraya 2007-11-24 ch 1,  | abusemy mittens are famous! :D this is such a relaxing poem, very soft and gentle. I especially love the last few lines about the angels and the idea of creating them and then watching them go free. Very thought provoking and beautiful as always. x |
| Clarelouise 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseyay, you really captured the stuck-in-maths-lessona-when-I-don't-want-to-be mood, i absolutely love the end bit! Soft rays tripping silently from the clouds as I dream - I am creating angels in the dying grass that we’ll watch in awe as they ascend into the heavens, snow as their wings also the contrast between the 'laughing beast' hee and the snow is very well done :) please keep writing more love u x |
| Wolf bathed in Star-light 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseoh i love it my faerie. though i would like to know why you had a fire in your math class. especially like the lines: I am creating angels in the dying grass that we’ll watch in awe as they ascend into the heavens, snow as their wings. love you x |
| SilverTwilight 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseThis made me so irrationally happy, kind of blissfully carefree. If I think like that in class, I get in trouble. Lovely, just lovely. ~ Dx |