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| drummerbonbon 2008-03-24 ch 1,  | abuseGorgeous. |
| SilverTwilight 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseAh, saviors...This is good. It feels abrupt to me, like no backup, but then that's just my opinion. But it's nice. ~ Dx |