These are very good. It almost seems that the song was written for your story. It's even more moving when you listen to the song while reading it. However, I can't help but want a last part where they finally make up. But who knows if there is a song by them that will work for it. I loved it!
Wolfie~

Hey, I really liked this story. The parts went really well with their song, and I for one know how hard it can be to make it like that sometimes. Hope you didn't have much trouble with it! ;]
It was sort of sad, but Jirou seemed to deserve to have Ichimaru leave, it just seemed suiting. Well, I'm off to check out your other works.

I liked it. Sweet, though I definatly won't tell my friends I rad something like this lol. I would appreciate it if you read my first story when I publish it.

I like this. It's really good. It flows really well. It makes me want like an entire story. you know, you could do that with this idea. Anyways, just wanted to let you know that i liked it. Keep writing-
UA

An interesting story. I really liked it! I'd say more, but I don't really remember what I was going to say. Well, must go and update my works.