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Reviews For: Decency Would Insist Upon a Final Goodbye

Unknown Survivor
2008-01-11
ch 1,
abuseNice. I like the emotion portrayed here. Keep up the good work. ^^

~Unknown Survivor~
Blissfully Sarcastic
2007-12-10
ch 1,
abuseI liked it.
Went a little crazy on the bolding...
But it had a good flow to it; good idea; good style.
Keep it up!
thecolourgrey
2007-11-25
ch 1,
abuseyour emotions are conveyed very strongly in the poem...very relatable/good job!
water lorelei
2007-11-24
ch 1,
abuse...

Sorry. At least you expressed anger this time. The dramatic bold really brings the piece out of the page... So just tell them what you said here. They'll listen.

-Rachel
standing.in.the.wreckage
2007-11-24
ch 1,
abuseI could relate to this with my ex-best friend(i hate saying that.) good job write on!
Shinyfighter
2007-11-23
ch 1,
abuseAwesome piece and I like how you stressed several of the words to bring out more of the emotional standing. I could feel the dissapointment and annoyance throughout the piece and you did a good job portraying it.
Princess-anna57
2007-11-23
ch 1,
abuseTotally understand this poem. I'm so going through it right now. *sigh*. Your poem is very expressive and emotional, very well done. Always be positive and write on.

~Anna~ ^_^
mizu no kokoro
2007-11-23
ch 1,
abusebitter...
what is a true friend anyway-
not so many words

keep writing
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