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| Unknown Survivor 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseNice. I like the emotion portrayed here. Keep up the good work. ^^ ~Unknown Survivor~ |
| Blissfully Sarcastic 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. Went a little crazy on the bolding... But it had a good flow to it; good idea; good style. Keep it up! |
| thecolourgrey 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abuseyour emotions are conveyed very strongly in the poem...very relatable/good job! |
| water lorelei 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuse... Sorry. At least you expressed anger this time. The dramatic bold really brings the piece out of the page... So just tell them what you said here. They'll listen. -Rachel |
| standing.in.the.wreckage 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseI could relate to this with my ex-best friend(i hate saying that.) good job write on! |
| Shinyfighter 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseAwesome piece and I like how you stressed several of the words to bring out more of the emotional standing. I could feel the dissapointment and annoyance throughout the piece and you did a good job portraying it. |
| Princess-anna57 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseTotally understand this poem. I'm so going through it right now. *sigh*. Your poem is very expressive and emotional, very well done. Always be positive and write on. ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| mizu no kokoro 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abusebitter... what is a true friend anyway- not so many words keep writing |