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| Billie.Joelle 2008-01-15 ch 1,  | abuseI can totally relate. Oh my goodness, that is amazing, I love how you just put it all into flowing, descriptive words. wow. Very nice. |
| Blissfully Sarcastic 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseIt was...Okay. It's much too repetitive for me. It could probably be narrowed down to about six lines. (I didn't count, just estimated.) But the idea within itself is amazing. |
| water lorelei 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseLike most of the times when I read your poetry, I really don't know what to say. (except that you do deserve better and that I still hate him.) So when I see you next I'm going to give a BIG hug, k? KW, sweetheart. -Rachel |
| Shinyfighter 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseWow...this traumatic experience you've just experience is vividly expressed in your writing. The irony in the struggle is one that many can relate to and I feel that you did a great job expressing it. I hope all becomes well for you. Keep it shiny... |
| wrapped-in-porcelain 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseit's exactly how love goes. depressing really. :-/ |