hehehe, funny and good and cliffy!

aiden's all expecting to meet this perfect, charming girl...i bet he gets a different reaction. hehehehe.

and like i've told you, it's pretty badass that Gabriel is a woman. i hate how all Biblical characters seem to be men and whatnot. FEMINISM ALL THE WAY.

ahem. cough. now let's not go all Felicity shall we?

anyhow, write more. now. =] because i like so far. a lot.

every = ever
One word could answer this question. Love.
That sentence might be more effective as "One word could answer this question: love." However, do what you like.

Overall I really liked this. It was well written, it was thought out, it was ORIGINAL. Good job, keep writing.

Wow, I really liked this. It's so sweet, and sad. The way you described the girl was so lovely =]

I know this is just a few paragraphs, but it would make an amazing short story.

k.X

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oh, i do like the title. "blind" like blind love, lol. i like the sort of "love at first sight" and forbidden-ness. its a really good, captivating start/prologue/intro and i cant wait for more.

yay, cece for starting to write.