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Twilight Starr 2008-06-23 . chapter 6
Very interesting. That was definitely a unique case. Sorry for taking so long to R&R. Keep writing.

Have a great day.

~Twilight Starr~
criti-sized 2008-06-17 . chapter 6
Okay, when I saw the title for this chapter I had to double take.
Ha, turning tricks, LMAO. Don't trust them politicians, lol.

He was watching Gilliga's Island? Wow, I haven't heard of that show in a minute. Though I expected more of a fight, it made me laugh that hey killed the gy so easily and the added kics for measure.

Interesting as always.

C.S.
AnthoNYC - ToNY 2007-12-24 . chapter 2
I like how you kept the school teacher secretive and how you built her personality. Good job, it was well worth my time!

-Anthony (Tony)
Twilight Starr 2007-11-29 . chapter 5
Nice addition. These stories are quite interesting and entertaining. Great job!

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr 2007-11-29 . chapter 4
A cross-dresser and a happy ending. Aww, that's terrific. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr 2007-11-29 . chapter 3
Oh, my. That was very interesting. That was a great story. What the boy wrote in the letter made me laugh.

Thanks again for all your reviews!

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr 2007-11-25 . chapter 1
The beginning reminded me of the old femme fatale movies. I think that's what they are called. Spank him with a cane--well, that had to be *interesting*. Great job!

Thanks for your reviews of "Unusual Dawn". I really appreciate it.

~Twilight Starr~
AnthoNYC - ToNY 2007-11-24 . chapter 1
So Jeffery Fox really does end up getting killed. Good work on this - I like it, and I hope to see more work for this collection. You're good at this short-story projects. I could never write a short story that was short enough to be considered one. It's one of my disadvantages. I like the army of dialogue you send the reader. It keeps the reader interested all throughout the story. Needles to say, good job once again.

-Tony
Octello 2007-11-24 . chapter 1
As the synopsis said I would, I did indeed go "What the heck?" But it was a good "What the heck?". A very funny story!
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