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| Tytherpol 2008-01-14 ch 1,   | it is short and choppy brave and concise the brevity of thought before the narrator moves on is life-like for such an intense situation and i really love that you didn't use a puntuation after the 'breathes' it allows them to flow and really float like a breath would here pretty cool |
| Valkin 2007-11-24 ch 1, | Doors close and yet you find yourself someones hand to pull you and give you power in your heart. It keeps you sustained. That is what I read from this. |