haha. its so funny when a guy gets flustered. nice one shot! i love the beginning with her blabbing.

This is an okay story.

I guess it's just that because the title was "Bus Stop", I wish you incorporated the setting in the story more. Like, I dunno, maybe making the scene where they got together take place at the bus stop.

In short, I would have preferred if we saw that the bus stop actually came to mean something for the both of them, since, well, it IS the title. It deserves more than just a few moments in the spotlight, don't you think? :)

i know i love a story a one shot especally
when just after i read that my sholders go up so far they touch the sides of my head.
omy thats how much i lloved this one shot.
wow. you have a very good. very good. mind there, i normally have to wait for some inspiration.
amazing loved it!

lovedd it!! haha. it was so cute =) even with the cliqueness... but i liked how he said that thing in the end..

so cute... *giggles*

Funny. Cute. Fluffy. And excellent writing. What more do I need to love this? (:
Love to xoxluurve for adding this to our c2. (:
*Oh and I never got around to replying to your review reply, but I'm happy to hear you subscribe to our c2! I hope you like it. (:

awhh, this is cute! it kinda made my day too! thank you! :D

Aww... that was sweet :) It was nice reading how their relationship eventually evolved into something friendlier.

So, this is where you've disappeared off to! You changed accounts :)

Cute story.

CUTE! I wish I could write one-shots like you :-)

It's a really sweet oneshot, but I agree when you say it's kind of abrupt, but I think a little work might make it even better.

aw!!

I really like it! It was so cute =]

Especially loved the whole murderer/rapist bit, it made me laugh. Everyone thinks it, most people don't say it!

that was really cute...though could have been longer...

The story was very sweet and cute.