Ah! It's beautiful! You know how when you read a story, and it's kind of rustic. And romantic. And even if it leaves a whole lot to the imagination... actually, I think that's almost better. I love reading writing like this. Because it's so mysterious and stunning. It makes you feel tingly. Lovely.

Lovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelove
lovelove it!

OH.. very good chica. It was really suggestive and the detail was great. You did a good job explaining how Alexander felt when he saw her all the way till the moment he left. Nice job!!

Aww. That was wicked good. And slightly sad. But great all around. I like your writing style. I hope you write more oneshots like this!

Hey!
Love it!
Has a true depth to it...and the descriptions are really good. :)
Will you be continuing this?
*cross fingers*