Reviews for Missing: One Rock

Venus Smurf1 2007-12-18 ch 1,	abuseVery beautiful, and very sad. You have such a gift with words! I'm amazed that you can go from being hilariously funny to poignant and deep like this. Well done!
Cupid's Jinx 2007-12-15 ch 1,	abuseAww! That's such a lovely poem! It's really powerful! Aww!
Clarelouise 2007-11-25 ch 1,	abuseaw this is so sad jessi im not joking when i say i have tears in my eyes right now although the full stops in the middle are a bit unusual i think they really work, and they need to be there because it is all one verse and there are different ideas in it. they are also quite final, which makes it even sadder very powerful writing, and very effective! x
Enaid 2007-11-24 ch 1,	abusesad sweet simple but with so much meaning. very well done as always
Ramza the Heretic 2007-11-24 ch 1,	abuseWhile it is interesting how you've used various things--grass, rock, balloon, and so on--as symbols of/metaphors for members of the family, that's really all that's original about the poem. The rest are mostly timeworn phrases said and written for...I don't know how long.
Aomera 2007-11-24 ch 1,	abusethis is really good, wonderful ideas and imagery - the only thing is your punctuationis kinda strange. you shouldn't just put a full stop at the end of each line, sometimes thats ok but often not. lovely but very sad pixie xx