Wow! Very well written.

Don't know why there aren't loads of reviews!

Wow! Not what I was expecting!

Thank you for *posting* this story. It was very well written, and very humorous. Please continue writing, as you are extremely talented.

Good Job,
FT

Interesting start. I seem to remember reading this before ... as a one shot, maybe? Maybe I'm just going crazy :P I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. You have a very nice writing style, quite intriguing.