this was so amazingly cute and yet managed a lovely slashy ending. Major kudos on a job more than well done.

Ah! Brilliant!

I'm so sad. I have the distinct impression that this is a oneshot. That means no more Jinx. I'm so distraught over that. (is that how you spell that? meh.)

Anyways, I have nothing coherent to say; I'm still busy reveling in the characters you made and bemoaning the fact that I don't live in their world. *sighs* Dammit. I would make a good witch, I swear! I'm tall and "intimidating" but lanky and begging for magic to course through my veins!!

...but I'll shutup now

sorry 'bout that


loved your story

OMG that was creepy, read my penname and look at my avatar! I swear I have the intuition of a Mother XD!
Aw... the whole idea of this is EXTREMELY fluffy and yet... sexy... Shari seems to be "Fairty tale" with than wiccan, but at the same time, he seems to be a mix of both since you mentioned an elemnt, in fairy tale witches, they just say random stuff or shoot lightning from their hands =P excellent story!

They are so sweet together. What Jinx means when he says "Master" isn't what others might hear.

Not a lot a build up to the love scene. Nothing in the first half of the story would indicate that it would end with one (other than it's that type of story). All Jinx's longing is confined to the end.

Even though Shari thought Jinx's personality changed, it didn't really. Jinx is still Jinx.

Aw, just aw! I absolutely adore Jinx and Shari's relationship! They're so cute! I love this!

That was so awesome! I loved it! I think there should be more!! There should be a convenient escape from wherever Whitney was sent... or something...

Great oneshot, keep up the good work.

That was certainly interesting and lemony. You should make a longer story, or divide em up into chapters. it is easier for some people to read if they have distinct seperations.

You are fantastic at writing lemony slash. Super props and lots of caramel for you.

Shari is kick ass! i think i'm becoming quite addicted to ur stories. they're simple but brilliant

Oh. That's adorable. And not just fluff, too...plot AND fluff. Very well done. :D

This was really good story! It had an entertaining plot and some interesting characters. I could just envision Shari's hair bursting into flames and that keep out spell in the begining was just brilliant. Anyways, great job and keep up the good work!

Lovely.

M...more delicious fluff.

I said that outloud and my mother gave me a funny look. Apparently she has never experienced the awesomeness that is cute man-on-man action. >.<

-ruler

I've just finished reading through a good many of your stories, and this is my conclusion:

You are absolutely *brilliant*. Your subject matter is, for lack of a better word, AWESOME! I love how you can go from dragons to faeries to witches to Enchanters/Enchantresses (ha!)... and those are all the things I love reading about.

So bravo! You are definitely my favorite author right now!