I totally love this one. OMG You have no idea. SO beautiful... (ok me...getting evil and dark) so bittersweet. God so good!

WOO FOR CATHOLICS ON FICTIONPRESS! 8D
sorry, i happened to notice on your bio that you're catholic too. :P

Maybe "lind" or something?

Anyway, I love all but the ending. The concept of the ending is perfect, but the last couplet came across very weak. I would probably favorite if you changed it.

Love,
~Dia

that was your best poem that i've read so far! it was short, simple and i love the rhymes! really nice! um a title idea? i can only think of "unable to see"

Good poem. :) Hmm can't think of a title, but I hope that you do! Thank you for sharing. Write on.

~Anna~ ^_^