Reviews for Boy Of The Moon - FictionPress.com

Toxin89 2007-12-20 ch 1,	abuseWell, nicely done man. I especially like the part where you make us think he actually got the moon, I like those kind of twisted. Also I think the second ruler line you placed was off, between the end of the son's part and the father's part, you should re adjust it. Unless you were going for that kind of seperation. I didn't see any errors, unless I glossed over them. Well done! I can't wait to read your others.
Kneeling Glory 2007-12-13 ch 1,	abuseIt is not easy to switch between character's points of views in a single story - you made the transitions go smoothly. Good job. I like the content and the humanity of this piece. It's easy for people to forget how ugly discrimination and intolerance can be. We need stories like this to remind us. Keep writing.
DemonBunny205 2007-12-02 ch 1,	abuseThat was a cool chapter. I really liked the descriptive launguage. Your cool, and your works cool. Continue!! I will wait in my pen, like a good Demon Bunny. ^-^
Hanyou Yogonem 2007-11-24 ch 1,	abuseVery sad, I hope the boy was happy, where ever he came to after he died. Beautiful, yet sad...