Lovely work Hidden. I like the format so much, that it struck the right chord and allowed me to voice a poem I had been mulling over for a couple hours.

I like the clarity of this piece and how honest it is. The feelings are communicated clearly and the structural format lends itself superbly to the overall fit and feel of the poem. Nice work here I must say. I must say that it's lovely to hear from you again, thank you for your reviews my friend. :)

That was hot! That was... that was really intense. VERY good. One of my faves