hm... don't you think you should give prince charming a bit of a break? just kidding, i don't think he deserves a break either. when you first fall in love, it seems, everything he does is perfect, and he has no flaws. but then, there comes a point when you see him as he truely is: broken, not beautiful. but maybe you can make him whole again.

aw dummy prince charming. lol its like backwards cinderella except shes still a sweetheart when she returns to rags.

i like the way this is written a lot.

this was so sad, but nonetheless a good write.

nice work.

Love the twistedness in the ending. Great originality and imagery. Keep up the amazing work. ) -Sara

wow, I really like this piece. The imagery is amazing, and it's just an overall good poem. Keep it up!

I liked it but I can't say that I liked the ending very much, to me it do esn't really fit in right. Almost like something else should be said either before or after it to help close. But other then that it was mwah, excellente!