Ha ha, nice chapter. I liked the 'making-up'. Thanks for writing again!

All these reviews, silly to think you need another one saying how fantastic this is.

so sad

omg that was amazing! it's like 1:30 in the morning and i've been glued to this for like an hour. please tell me there's more!

this is a really great story. it is absolutely hilarious. keep writing. find clay and kill james. i always did hate james.

(Gasp!) You updated! Wow, I can't believe it.

I don't get why they have to meet James if Marylin is looking for Clayton... but I'm sure you will make it clear. Thanks for updating!

LMAO I L-O-V-E UR STORY
its so awkward and funny
my kind o' humor!

omg. this is the most bloody hilarious story ever. and clyton is so cuye. i can just imagine him. poor marilyn. she must be so confused. having clayton and then james and on top of all that having to have all the relatives in her house. i dont know how she stands it. shuld be interesting to see how this ahole thing turns out ;) cant wait for the rest of the story!!

wow this is great. Very orginal. And did I mention I love her sense of humor?;)

O M FREEKING G!! aw, whyd he run away!!?? and not cal again! o, theres so much i wanna comment on, but its a school night...blech. BUT THEY TOTALLY SHOULDVE KISSED!! TWICE! i'll be waiting for the next chapter. please get it out soon!

I absolutely love this story! I need more!

dang, james is strong...
poor marilyn she seems to spend alot of time at the hospital but i bet clayton will be there to make her feel better *wink wink*

y'd she call that guy? she and clayton are so MEANT TO BE! and how old are these people again? just wondering i kinda forgot :P

AW!

AHAHAH i love clayton