There is so much pain here...And this is a poem that I can relate to in many ways, but this isn't time about my rambling on about my problems and how I can relate, it's about your poem.

My favorite line in this would probably have to be
"scraping through my head 'til I remind myself
I'm alone"

The hurt is so palpable and utterly breaking in just those few words, and it expressing just how much you've been hurting. Just a little reminder, though you probably already know, it's OK to hurt..And it WILL get better. Just trust me on this one ^^ I've been there too. OK well, BY!

~Dillio~

Very good poem. I love the emotion in it. It also flows very nicely. Keep it up!
Faith

I really hate reviews that say nothing but happy bits of fluff, but.. i really loved this. The whole tone was great.

Love it. Love the theme, the tone, the ending... it really ties itself up, which is what I always love about poetry. Each poem always has its special ending that reflects on the entire piece. Great job, 5/5!

~WB

That's...beautiful. The ending was perfect. It didn't matter that your piece was short: it was well done. Good work. Keep it up. = )

aw, so sad. BUt I think that you did an excellent job rymning, normally it's very hard for writers to do wthout making a piece akward, but you did a great job.